More comments on our 100WC Posts

We've started putting our 100WC posts on our class website because students from other schools couldn't comment on them through the school's portal unfortunately.

Check out some of this weeks 100WC posts at:

http://www.mrstaylorsclass.com/100wc-posts.html

Here are some of our recent comments:

Hi Justin - thank you for this exciting 100wc! I'm particularly impressed by the punctuation you've used - you're clearly very confident when using speech marks! I'd have loved to hear a bit more description of the asteroid - perhaps include that rather than squeezing in that ending. :-) Mr K (Team 100wc)

I like this story, it has a good plot, and it is hard with 100 words, but I think the sentences maybe should vary a bit more in length, or need some commas to break them down a bit, its an amazing story though, well done! from Georgia 

Fulneck school Leeds  Yorkshire, United Kingdom

Hi Sheridan Your story could have so easily developed into a long adventure story. Well done. I am very inquisitive and would like to find out more about your flower and what it actually looked like. I particularly like the phrase such crazy news. Keep writing.

Mrs Lynch (100WC Team)