Wednesday, 12 February 2014

Andreas 100WC

A man woke up early in the morning, he saw a weird floating white thing then it went throught the wall. He thought, was it my brother. He always said that when he died he would haunt him later. That evening he heard sounds. He told the council, meetings were held across the country to find an anwer. Then that afternoon his brother's ghost had a knife in its hand. He got out his sword and swung it. The knife flew and hit his dog. The dog died, know he was super angry. Then when he looked back he was gone.

7 comments:

  1. Great job Andreas. It was kind of scary!
    A pretty tough ghost!!
    sienna ox

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  2. Well done, you have used this prompt really well. You have made good word choices and used a selection of punctuation

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  3. Well done, this is a great way to use the prompt. It is such an interesting story and you have chosen your vocabulary really well. Keep writing!

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  4. Hi Andreas, it is a pretty good good story. From James

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  5. Hi Andreas I like it poor dog awesome!
    From Kiyan

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  6. Hello!
    I really like this story!

    From Christopher

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  7. Hi Andreas,
    I really like your story because it is very mysterious.
    From Ollie

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