Wednesday, 12 February 2014

Lauren 100WC

'Ooooh - ooooh.' That was the noise that had been coming to our town eveyr night. "Nancy, time for dinner!" yelled mum. When I came in for dinner, I was looking thoughtful. "Are you alright darling?" said mum. "Yeah, I'm fine. I just thought that I should go and find out where that noise had been coming from." The next day was worse. Meetings were held across the country to find an answer. I decided to discover where the noise was coming from with my BFF, Lulu. She agreed to come. "What if we get lost?" whispered Lulu. We ran into the forest and we saw a ghost elephant.
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  1. Anonymous15 February 2014 at 10:34

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  2. Anonymous17 February 2014 at 16:37

    Hi Lauren, I like the story. From James

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  3. Anonymous18 February 2014 at 17:20

    Hi Lauren,
    I really like this interesting story and a ghost elephant keep up the good work!

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  4. Rosalie28 February 2014 at 17:17

    A spine-tingling, imaginative paragraph; I am hoping Lauren will write episode number two!
    Rosalie

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  5. Unknown18 March 2014 at 16:52

    Thrilling story. Amazing story line and I can't wait to see more of Lauren's stories! Louisa

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