Wednesday, 12 February 2014

Oliver (4) 100WC

One day a new disease was found, it was getting worse by the day. So meetings were held across the country to find an answer. Doctors decided to make a wall between the healthy and the infected. There was also a part 2 to the plan. I part 2 of the plan the healthy would work on the cure. After 2 years the cure was created and doctors travelled to the other side of the wall to use the cure, but suprisingly it was deserted and wrecked. The doctors thought, "what happened here?" As they walked they heard strange noises then they saw a figure and heard a voice moan, "heeeelp."

7 comments:

  1. is it oliver g or w I don't know oh and good work love the story

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  2. Hi Jake here.
    Very nicely written and a very scary story.

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  3. Hi Oliver, looks like a good story from James

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  4. Awesome oliver I loooooooove it.
    From Kiyan

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  5. Hello Oliver!
    I like the story a lot! It was awesome!

    From Chris

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  6. I love it too! It was very exciting
    From Justin

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  7. Hi Oliver it was very exciting indeed! It was awesome too.

    From Justin

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